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About "Zolaria"

After a story is accepted for publication, the editorial process continues. The wise and savvy editors at The Southern Review helped make “Zolaria” a stronger story; they also made it shorter. For a window into what got left on the cutting room floor, check out the original final lines below. I once asked the audience at a reading to vote on which ending they preferred, the abbreviated or extended. The results? Dead even. Sigh.

The full story can be downloaded here in PDF format.


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Ogan Veen crawls from the mud to meet us. He whispers that I am a coward, and I agree. His skin is the texture of the scum below the dam and his hair is like the fur of a drowned raccoon.
He whispers, what about your children?
He whispers, so you think now they’re safe?

 

 

 

 

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Last Updated: 11 May 2011